Completed today:

-Revise dialogue to have simpler wording and more explanation in parts that only had one sentence
-Collected new imagery from children’s book illustrations to find a new style

Room for Improvement in my video:

(+) Revise dialogue

( ) Revise style + make if visually brighter overall

( ) Revise illustrations, reduce assets (repeat assets instead)

( ) Simplify movement, make it slow down in some parts (it’s too fast)

 

Visual Inspiration: